Thunderstorm

rain used
to be
just tear drops.

until one day
wind, with his
alacrity
came along
and told her

that together
They could be

thunderstorm.

8 thoughts on “Thunderstorm”

persoinpoesia2015 says:

August 24, 2016 at 10:45 pm

I like that 👏👏

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1. Aakash says:
  
  August 25, 2016 at 4:54 pm
  
  Thanks 🙂
  
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janelbrubaker says:

August 25, 2016 at 4:03 pm

A nice image.

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1. Aakash says:
  
  August 25, 2016 at 4:54 pm
  
  Thank you
  
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Brenda Davis Harsham says:

August 29, 2016 at 9:42 am

Wonderful poetry.

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1. Aakash says:
  
  August 29, 2016 at 10:07 am
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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Nishank Mehta says:

August 30, 2016 at 10:00 am

Stunning. Paints quite a picture, it does.

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1. Aakash says:
  
  August 30, 2016 at 11:34 pm
  
  Thanks
  
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