Adjectives

the moment
i saw her
i knew
this one was
worth
a broken heart

for words have
stabbed
more hearts than
swords

and she was
what poetry
aspired to be.

chaotic. wild. and breathtaking.

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11 thoughts on “Adjectives

  1. I just had more thoughts about the poem, and I apologize as I condensed the question 🙂 When you said, “She was what poetry aspired to be,” I read, “she was what I aspire to be.” Maybe . . . you’re more wild than you think? 😛 Beautiful piece 🙂

  2. Lovely! The picture of HER, came instantly in my mind when I read the words and although the poem doesnt say it, I am sure she isnt aware that poetry aspires to be her and that is why poetry actually aspires to her!

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